#1
I was writing something today and im not sure if I like it or not. it carrys the message that i have but it seems to intricate in a sense

"Gray man stands on wiser soil
So silent and so frail
To reconcile continuance
Alone in this world

There is only one love
Love is but desire
A noble man is waiting
Waiting for the end"
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#2
Seems fine to me.
Very nice lines too.
Then I whispered in her ear, fear me dear, for I am Death.


Why are you hiding?
Because the demons from my dreams are everywhere..

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