I'm going to crit as the song plays:
-I like how the drums in the beginning sound
-The snare is too loud, not enough bass
-The rhythm guitar tone doesn't sound thick enough imo.
-The lead tone sounds good though, good lead parts too.
-The song is a bit repetitive, even with the little breaks in the middle of the song, you keep on going back to the same riff.
-You changed the riff, but then you repeat that riff over and over again aswell.
-I would recommend a bit more variety, maybe more melody over top of the riffs to add direction to the song.

Overall it was okay, keep it up!

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