jtaf
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2010
265 IQ
#1
Well, this is my latest work, a pretty standard rock song. Its basically complete, but its missing the drums, except for a couple of fills. Any help with it would be incredibly appreciated. Also, Ill gladly crit in return.
Thanks a lot
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mka12992
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Join date: Sep 2006
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#2
To be honest, this isn't my style, and I'm not really a drummer, but I figured I'd try and help out anyway. It's probably really lame, but you could use it to get some ideas going. I'm sure someone else will come in here eventually and stomp all over mine, haha. But here you go!

And if you'd like to crit this in return, I'd be very grateful.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1480956
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jtaf
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Join date: Dec 2010
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#3
Thanks a lot for your help, but to be honest thats not what Im looking for. I critted your song, though.
Anybody else has any suggestions?
jtaf
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Join date: Dec 2010
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#5
Thanks a lot for your help, dylann. You want me to crit any of your songs?
Im still open to any suggestions, btw...
Ometh
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Join date: Oct 2009
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#6
Hey dude, sick rock and rollin' =)
Tried doing a drumtrack that fits, I think it turned out pretty cool
Didn't finish it though, but if you want I can do it all the way through ;D
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Ometh
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#8
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thats terrible

OMG, seriously? And I spent so many hours working on it, and I was totally serious about it aswell. Oh well...
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RedDeath9
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#9
Quote by Ometh
Hey dude, sick rock and rollin' =)
Tried doing a drumtrack that fits, I think it turned out pretty cool
Didn't finish it though, but if you want I can do it all the way through ;D




I may have a go at this later. It's actually a kind of catchy song.
Ultraussie
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#12
Hi, I liked the song you make, and I played around with a couple of drum ideas, its amazing how the drums can change the emotion of a song.
I dunno if these are too technical, but give it a listen.
Oh and check out the nice awesome fill I made at the ending.

Rock on bro.

I haven't got any songs to crit.
*Awrkward Silence*
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