#1
I've got this song i've been writing for my band, it seems to move too slowly and gets boring towards the begging of the verse. Also I need some help with writing a drum track for it.
Its a kinda vaugly sludge, progressive, thrash, contemporary metal song (it is slightly like those styles, tell if you think it fits under a different style. PS the vocals with be gravely but not screaming or death growls) it needs kinda stomping pounding sorta beats to back it up.

Also if anyone has other ideas of how it can be changed to sound better let me know.
Attachments:
metal song 17.gp5
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#3
The bass gave me a nose bleed.
On playing the Paul Gilbert signature at the guitar store extensively, my missus sighed:
"Put it down now, It's like you love that guitar more than me!"
In Which I replied.
"Well it has got two F-Holes!"
#4
Quote by Macabre_Turtle
"for my band."

No offense, but are you implying that you have a drummer that can't write drums?


he can write drums, i just wanted to see what people could come up with.
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  • Schecter Hellraiser C-1 Blackcherry
  • Randall RG75D-G3
  • Dunlop Crybaby Wah
  • Boss FV-50 H volume
  • Boss DM-2 analogue delay


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#5
This is what i ended up doing.
I like alot of movement on the bass pedal, so thats why theres a fair bit of double bass, i like the way it rolls aha
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metal song 17(PG08).gp5
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