Not keen on the drums only on the left during part of the song (glad that only happens for a short time). The guitar riffs are all quite good! Most of the the guitar playing is good, but not always tight. Singing is OK overall (your singing is at it's best when you're belting it out; but not saying you should scream through the whole song), vocal melody is good. The ending could be more dramatic. I like it for the most part. Lots of it is quite good. Please review my music at this link: