#1
Written by Deqan-21/09/2011--09:30 pm--


stanza:1
no one hears me
no one hears me scream
in deep silence i lie
waiting with a thirst to die

dream after dream
dreams i cant presume
from the place i came
no one is to blame

chorus:
angels and demons
vampires at night
in pain they cry
while i thirst to die

Stanza:2
i wont cry
I wont cry,for you
i can no longer stay
its time to break away

I tell myself
il put myself to sleep
i wake to see you
and wait to conceal you

chorus:
promises and love
lie there cold
nothing you do
will make me believe you


Outro:
So il Let my faith die
and betrayal engulf my mind
cause When im done Dreaming
I'll be out of time


all il wait for . . .
all il kill for . . .
a thirst to die . . .


This is one of my favorite lyrics ive written . . . . .im working on a tune for this song.want it to sound like an alternative grungy . . . . gothic style rock\,,/ . .do comment and let me know if any thing can be changed . . . im open to suggestions . . . ive changed part of it to sound better . .any suggestions? .. il be happy to crit yours if you want me to . .. peace . .
Last edited by deqan at Sep 27, 2011,
#2
I tell myself
il cry myself to sleep
i wake to see you


I wont cry
I wont cry,for you


but I thought you were crying earlier?
#4
Quote by Megadethfan245
Seems to contradict itself a few times

i didnt happen to notice that it was contradictory before . .. it was just one of those songs you write within five minutes and really dont care wat it means . . .il rewrite it and post it . . . .
#5
Quote by iup788


but I thought you were crying earlier?


thanks for noticing that part . . . .i didnt put any thought while writing this . . was just fast word flow . . . iam going to rewrite it . . .
Last edited by deqan at Sep 26, 2011,