#1
Youre brimming with passive aggression
And i hate it with aggressive passion.
You're spiteful to your body
Like your face is already out of fashion.

Baby, youre crazy if you think anyone really wants fireworks.

They cant compete with the stars, they always fall back down to earth
And Brilliance burns outs, and glittering trails disperse,

So Why stay so close, to a threat of explosion? Someone will only end up getting hurt,

And seeing as you already seem to be smiling through some kind of burning agony,
Is it wrong that I dont want any of that rubbing off onto me.?

I mean this in the best possible way:
You have to love yourself
Before anyone else can.
--------------------i'm definitely the alphaest male here--------------------
#2
it's all kept at a high level, so the intensity fizzles to maintain consistency. as clever as the first two lines are, they seem almost forced.

good thoughts. I think you could write something else entirely to say the same thing, but what do I know really
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#3
I know what you mean about the first lines. I just had to include them.
This whole thing spontaneously burst into existence. Maybe it should be something else


Thanks.
--------------------i'm definitely the alphaest male here--------------------