Taco_Bastard
Taco Sales Engineer
Join date: Jan 2010
54 IQ
#1
This is a piece me and a bud co-wrote. It's pretty sweet, but I'm not sure where we should take it after bar 70. Any thoughts, suggestions, or critique would be appreciated. C4C

P.s. Apologies if the harmonics sound off, I use tuxguitar, and saved it as a gp5. Thus crappy harmonics might exist.
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jaikin1
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Join date: Sep 2011
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#2
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Join date: Mar 2011
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#4
Cool intro, but I;d make it sound less stop-starty, that riff is really solid.
I like it when the bass only part comes, and when it exits it it's pretty heavy.
The saxophone is annoying, unless those are meant to be vocals.
The guitar solo was starting to get sweet, then it disapeered.
It needed to be heaps longer.

So after, maybye make the song slow down quiet, then ramp it up with a very fast brutal section, quiet again, maybye a breakdown for moshing, then send it back to a chorus or verse.

The song sounded abit slow to me, ramp the tempo up a teensie bit.

Otherwise fairly solid/
7/10.

Btw Tuxguitar for the win
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