Thanks for the review! Interesting guitar melodies: good you double-tracked 'em. All of the guitar playing is good, some of it is pretty impressive! Singing is OK. I wish the ending was more dramatic somehow. Sounds good overall!
Singing was decent. But the playing was great. Rhythm was solid and I can see why that solo is one of your favs. I like how the lead started in; it went well with the song.

If you work on it a bit more I think it could develop into something more than a quick song.

Also...If you have time check out my song(also pretty quick and improvised lol)