#1
This is an original song that I came up with the name before I was even aware of a Lou Reed/Metallica collaboration lol.

Here's the U-Tube link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LoIlGjZV21g

Ignore the delay and lemme know what you think of the music
I'd be happy to C4C!
"CHOOSE YOUR FATE AND DIE!!"


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#3
Quote by L2112Lif
Are you the table?


I'm just stepping out to get a sandwich



Are you only interested in eating your sandwich on me? I AM NOT THE TABLE!


This is my song. I am the refrigerator.
"CHOOSE YOUR FATE AND DIE!!"


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#4
Okay, I'm back.

I like the premise, but the quality is pretty off-putting. There's not really much to comment on, the progression is pretty cool, the vocals a bit shaky at times... It'd probably be better with proper equipment and more instrumentation, though.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1484012
#5
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Thanks, I'm just glad to hear feedback. You've got a bunch of music on your page, I'll check it out fuh shooo!
"CHOOSE YOUR FATE AND DIE!!"


-- Do as I say, not as I do. --
#7
The intro is hauntingly beautiful. Like the change the guitars a little loud for your microphone its distorting the recording if you turned it down a little it would be sweet. Lyrically really great really nice song. Like your singing tone it's kinda pop/punky. I'm a sucker for that style it just sits nicely on my my ear. Great song.

Really sorry for the delayed crit return. Well played and performed.