#1
We can climb, but we'll fall
We can run, from it all
But they'll catch us in the end
Cause we're only human
If we joke, we may laugh
If we take, photographs
In due time they'll fade away
Just the like the feelings that we've made


They say there's nothing left to do
For one as cynical as you
You say there's nothing more to dream
In this dark that's bleeding through
You claim that, faith is for the fools
In this cold reality
I can't prove that it's not true
I just hope there's room for me


We may bleed, but we heal
We may fear, what we feel
But that only makes us real
In every lively tear concealed
If we go, different ways
Where the world ends we will meet again
When there's fire in the night
It could be our only light


There may be nothing left for me
In this dark and lonely world
There might be nothing I can say
To change this, cursed and lonely girl
But if that's true then I will be
Of a bright reality
Where the light can be returned
To the tragic lives we've seen

Hope you like it ^.^
#3
It was bitter, young fear :3

I prefer the abbreviated version, as people can infer their own meaning that way, but I named it as such because many of us are afraid to dream due to psychological and emotional restrictions placed in our mind, majorly from standards of society.

Sometimes you just gotta say, "f*** what everyone else thinks, I want to be -insert aspiration here- and go for it." :]
#6
Quote by BluePaintCult
I thought it stood for "I Will Be Your Friend"

kinda works that way, at least, as well :P


Thats what I thought it was as well...
#10
Quote by djgoesnomnom
We can climb, but we'll fall
We can run, from it all
But they'll catch us in the end
Cause we're only human
If we joke, we may laugh
If we take, photographs
In due time they'll fade away
Just the like the feelings that we've made
hm...i like this...i might come back and look for faults but on third read it still seems flawless..


They say there's nothing left to do
For one as cynical as you
You say there's nothing more to dream
In this dark that's bleeding through
You claim that, faith is for the fools
In this cold reality
I can't prove that it's not true
I just hope there's room for me
hm...the last line is the weakest leak imo....the rest is still good...


We may bleed, but we heal
We may fear, what we feel
But that only makes us real
In every lively tear concealed
If we go, different ways
Where the world ends we will meet again
When there's fire in the night
It could be our only light
in the fith line i like the word "separate" better than different...maybe that is beccuase i have heard it worded like that more though...


There may be nothing left for me
In this dark and lonely world
There might be nothing I can say
To change this, cursed and lonely girl
But if that's true then I will be
Of a bright reality
Where the light can be returned
To the tragic lives we've seen
....i can find nothing to pick out...it is all solid

Hope you like it ^.^



I did like it...I look forward to more from you...This made my day...It was the best thing i read today.

I haz gotten gud
#12
so im wondering what kind of genres you like. just to see what melody might go with this. p.s. i like it.
Last edited by rjaylaf at Oct 5, 2011,