#2
I really dig the intro. It's a bit of a sudden change down to the quiet part. I think it would work better going into something with more of a similar rhythm and then maybe go down to the less dynamic part later on in the song. That's just me though.

Overall very nice playing, some sweet licks. I like it.

Check out mine if you have a moment? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1485035
#3
Quote by DanielShaw123
I really dig the intro. It's a bit of a sudden change down to the quiet part. I think it would work better going into something with more of a similar rhythm and then maybe go down to the less dynamic part later on in the song. That's just me though.

Overall very nice playing, some sweet licks. I like it.

Check out mine if you have a moment? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1485035


very nice man thanks for the kind comment