#1
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Too many mistakes
Too many regrets
I used to love you
Now I wish you the best

Baby, I’m a hurricane
Faster than a bullet train
Gone off the rails
Now I’m back on track
And there aint no goin’ back!
Heartbreaker where loves concerned
And your love is just what I burned!

But I don't regret one decision I've made
If not for you I'd still be hidden away
And there's not a moment I'd ever trade away

From that point we could never be the same
Try to start something and Id lose you again

I know I was wrong but
When we were together it couldn’t feel more right

But still, you are in my thoughts.
I think about how it all changed
On the day that I had felt most estranged

And as you stare at me
With your clear blue eyes

Glistening tears move down your face
I had your heart and I broke it
You’re wise not to do the same again

But I don't regret one decision I've made
If not for you I'd still be hidden away
And there's not a moment I'd ever trade away

Baby, I’m a hurricane
Faster than a bullet train
Gone off the rails
Now I’m back on track
And there aint no goin’ back!
Heartbreaker where loves concerned
And your love is just what I burned!
#2
not bad, especially liked "Baby, I’m a hurricane
Faster than a bullet train "

it's too narrative though, could use more depth and imagery
other than that good attempt