#1
hey everyone im looking for someone to give me dirrection to this song.. where can i take it!? i planned this riff as the intro but i got no idea after this what to do.. so feel free download the file and change it/ play around with it see if you can come up with anything and if you do please let me see

thanks!

p.s the more you help me the more i will help you on one of your songs! or the more i will crit one of your songs for you
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#3
thanks heartless not really what i was looking for but :P il check some of your stuff out now!
#4
Quote by dylann
thanks heartless not really what i was looking for but :P il check some of your stuff out now!


Song

(Not the final album mix. I have since remastered it.)
Last edited by HeartlessEntity at Oct 9, 2011,
#5
I don't want any help with anything I'm doing. I'm just wondering what in the flying titty-****ing sky is nerd rock, and when can we stop with the inane subgenres?

And I'd encourage bringing a finished product for critiques instead of a tiny fraction of a song. Flesh your ideas out on your own. With just a few bars, it's hard to really tell what you want to do with it, and besides- autonomy is a good thing to learn early. Don't rely on us to finish your songs for you. It might sound harsh, but it's not meant to be. It's meant to be helpful.
#6
haha nerd song was just what the sound reminds me of i can imagine someone with a really nazely voice singing over the top of it haha like through a vodcorder or something haha yeah.

and yeah i have a hard time finishing songs i can normally come up with 1 or 2 riffs but i suck at progession so im just wondering if people here would be able to help point me in the right direction. obviously you dont want to but others might haha
#8
Honestly, what you have so far is some bichin', pimpin'-ass Stevie Wonder shit. I like it. But you do need more. And part of that "more" should be lyrics. I can imagine a soulful gospel-y singer busting out over this.