#1
http://soundcloud.com/lascailles-shroud/interval-06-the-silhouette-of

Got a lot of good feedback on this, so not too much has changed. The guitars aren't too different, the change lay mostly in vocals as they collided too much with the rest of the mix. EQ'ed a bit more and got some more 'cohesive separation' if that isn't too much of an oxymoron. The nonsensical solo is also more spread evenly, both panned hard left/right for a wider effect. All critiques welcome, and of course, C4C guaranteed!!

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Parallel Infinities, Interval 7:
The Silhouette Of A Star Descending
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The Pariah Structure
Everything that is
Will be my weapon
Everything that was
Will be my motives
I will create
Just to destroy
I am the new
Harbinger of your death

I will create the skies
Just to bring them down upon you
I will form the stars
Just to burn you with their light

The Swarm
Existence is our enemy
And you are the last
Your meager predecessors failed
They have never seen our purest forms

We will destroy your skies
Crack them open wide
We will consume your stars
Starve you of light

The Pariah Structure
You are but mere machines
A defect of Von-Neuman
Simple self preservation
No emotional prerogatives

You can never grasp
my deepest intentions
You can never see
Where my mind ventures

The Swarm
We are the absolute end
We are the indefinite death
The absolute zero point
Of all things organic

Cyclical operations in galactic espionage

The Pariah Structure
I will create the skies
Just to bring them down upon you
I will form the stars
Just to burn you with their light

One thousand years just to take a breath
Two thousand more to slowly exhale
All knowing, all seeing, never ending consciousness
Eternal amorphous paradigm shift

The Swarm
Pathetic waste of energy
This will now come to an end
Spinning quasars gamma ray bursts
Vomiting forth hypernova stars

I will see you burnt alive
In churning waves of nuclear flames
I will see your constructs die
To our dark matter cities

The Swarm + The Pariah Structure
I will bring your demise
In galactic waves of immeasurable death
I will bring the end
To all of your worlds
I will bring your demise
In gravity impossibly dense
I will bring the end
To your universe
Lascaille's Shroud

Progressive Cosmic Death Metal



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#2
It starts off well! Not to much different from the original recorded I heard, but still to the same heavy effect. The vocals have improved, although I had no problem with the original, maybe because I'm not much of a producer. So overall the mix is real good to my ears.

Guitar playing like always is superb, nothing to worry about there. How do you pan your guitars? It's awesome how your recordings turn out, some of the best I've heard on the forums. The leads are played very well nice job on those. This song flows perfectly and never gets boring. Love the vocals!

Thanks for giving me a real crit, instead of saying "get better". Much appreciated
#3
Thanks man!

The guitars are panned like this (using PODX3)

100% Left
80% Left - 4.5 db lower (average)
100% Right
80% Right - 4.5 db lower (average)

Its quadtracking, I like to use it because it makes harmonies and single note rhythms much more powerful, at least for me since I lack any high end equipment.
Lascaille's Shroud

Progressive Cosmic Death Metal



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