Hi guys!

This is one of the first few posts on this site (i have been here for a while but rarely posted anything). Anyways, been playing for like 4 years (kind of on and off) so
I would like you guys to please rate my overall (if any) technique on my humble take of this solo from the Red Hot Chilli Peppers (Californication). Please feel free to post any constructive comments.

Keep Well and Rock on /m/

Here is the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WMX4a-lloRE

On a side note: I got this very good friend of mine who entered this contest so it would be awesome if you guys could vote for her by clicking on "like" on this FB group thing.
Help would be apreciated:

1. Wrong forum
2. Not voting for your friend
3. 4 years huh?
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erm... wrong forum, should be in recordings.
Belief is a beautiful armour but makes for the heaviest sword.
haha.lol. well... the sound you hear on the background was my father singing...some opera stuff... quite embarrasing i must say.lol
and sorry for posting on the wrong place. i am a noob in the site so i dont know much about the rules and stuff
Oh god. My ears.
dirtbag ballet by the bins down the alley
as i walk through the chalet of the shadow of death
everything that you've come to expect

ok.so what can I do to improve then? You will obv say practise.... but what kind of exercises. there are like a gazillion of them. and unfortunately i don't have all the time in the world to practise ( I can't sit down the whole day like some people could, I got college and stuff so I don't have that much time somedays but Give up I will never ever do....as I love guitar even If i sound like a noob).