Thanks to the feedback from "TheDistracted" and others, I have encouraged to record another blues classic with vocals. The mic and guitar set up has been improved, I spent more time getting relaxed into the song, and I sang closer in tune. I would welcome feedback to help me improve further. Thanks for all your help so far.

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I like'd the guitar work quiet a bit! I've got a snowball aswell, and it really is pretty damn impressibe little mic, for what it is.

My suggestion would be to record the tracks sperate and then put a video to go over both of them, or put the two video together in one. Otherwise, really good. I liked it.


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Thanks for the feedback so far. I'll try to put a bit more passion into my singing now that I'm roughly in tune at least. And the suggestion about multitracking and mixing is great. It is tricky to set things so that the mix is right live and there is no way to re-balance things later. Very helpful. More feedback welcome.
well, idk, i feel it needs some work, first of all the whole looped drum thing playing over 67483 times got very boring fast, mix it up a bit add fills difrent grooves ect. u need more layers in the song not just boring drums, alittle guitar riff, sing, repeat. add a rythm guitar, a bass, some lead licks, harmonies. vocally, like they said above, it just lacked passion and inspiration, it needs some more emotion so it dosnt sound like a robot, work out some melodies so ur not in the same octave the whole song too. theres just a few things, keep at it and have fun man, c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1488320
Hey dude! Firstly, I agree with the opinions above me. You should deffinitely record the tracks separately. If you do this with some type of recording program, you will be able to do everything you do more in-depth and to make it in the best way you can, without being distracted by other things. In this way, you will be able also to experiment with your ideas and possibilities and to improve yourself not only as a performer, but as musician.

Oh, and I forgot to tell you that I really like it, haha. The playing is really good, and the singing could be improved. You have the potential to make the things even better. Good luck!

C4C? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R_DgCl0O_Gc