Venomtank
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Join date: Apr 2009
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#1
Hey, this is a song me and my drummer came up with the other evening. I already made a thread but deleted it as my computer started messing up whenever I clicked on it to change the tab over so here it is Solo is my first ever attempt at a bluesy solo, definitely needs some work but its not bad I suppose. All and any criticism is welcome and if you want me to have a look at something of yours, just ask and I will do so
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Blues Bass Heavy Progression in E Minor With Drums.gp5
csdsf
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Join date: Oct 2011
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#2
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Shaharz
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Join date: Jan 2007
921 IQ
#3
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OT: Well, simple 12-bar-blues, solo is mostly pentatonic. Can't say it's something special, but it's done pretty well.
I think you should add some changes to the rythem guitar, make it less monotonic, and um... that's pretty much it. Not too much to say. For a first-ever-blues-attempt it's pretty good, hopefully this will lead you into writing more complex and longer stuff
Venomtank
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Join date: Apr 2009
873 IQ
#4
Ah thank you yeah, I'm gonna change it up a bit, but really don't know what to do for the rhythm guitar If I try some simple arpeggios then it just takes away from the bass riff, which I love. The solo is pretty much just the Em pentatonic with the occasional blues note shoved in :P not too good at soloing really :S I'm learning though what could you suggest for the rhythm guitar then?
Shaharz
DAH KEWL GUY
Join date: Jan 2007
921 IQ
#5
Well, getting better at soloing is pretty much just learning scales and practicing, so not much I can do to help you there.

What I can do is open up your mind a bit about rythem guitar (Since I am a former-bassist-turned-rythem-guitarist and I find the role amazing and full of options). Here's an example for something for the rythem guitar to play, just off the tip of my head:
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Blues Bass RiThAmGitTaR.gp5