#2
in wrong section so probably will get moved.

as for your tone well if it wasn't buried under a tone of fx then it would be easier to comment. your clean tone was buried under reverb so it's hard to really tell how good it is. way to much distortion on the other part. your playing wasn't bad but you need to lay off the stuff that covers up your playing. tough to really judge how effective the pick is with all that going on.