#1
It definitely needs vocals, but I'm not capable of doing them...haven't posted in the forum in awhile and I'm curious to know what people think. It's called Catalyst.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JAe4SKBUA5c&feature=channel_video_title

Thanks for listening!
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#2
thats a good riffage at the start, but in my opinion it sounds a little bit repetitive, you should make some changes here and there, i also listened to "the white forest", really good i liked a lot.
#3
Thanks for listening! I agree it's a bit repetitive, as I originally wrote it with vocals in mind. I appreciate your crit though!
Nicks and dents are battle scars...they give a guitar history.


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#4
Intro is pretty good, nice heavy sound. I like the bass playing, doing a few interesting things at times. Some vocals would fit nicely over this, you can maybe find someone to do them at some point in the future. Solos are good, very solid playing technique. Like the post-solo melody around the the 4minute mark. Production is quite reasonable, although I think the hi-hats were little too loud some of the time.
Overall you have a really good song, it just needs some vocals to really complete it.

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1482959