Radman_Paiza
^__^ KAWAII DESU-NE~~
Join date: Nov 2009
313 IQ
#1
whalestory #1

we cool guys. this is song we make. its a good song.

please look through c4c always bro.

EDIT for 1.1: In my defense, it was originally written as D | E7 | A7 | D x2 so when I wrote the melodies I probably thought I hadn't changed it... I think.
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i am witty guy 1.1.gp5
Last edited by Radman_Paiza at Oct 19, 2011,
KirkChicoHammet
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2011
177 IQ
#4
So, I liked the intro, nice melody there, although I think I already heard something similar
(But that's okay, 'cause it's nice )

Next, the calm part, I think it broke the mood a little, but its okay I guess, but I would keep it fast-paced

Oh, as for the "almost liek blink 184" section, I think it isn't really necessary, it sounds like it's another song... I would cut it off I guess, but it's your choice.

Also, the ending is strange.

Nice song