#1
Yeah, I'd love to know what people think of this song. It's in my profile and of course, I'll C4C anyone who wants it. The mix is rough (well needs sorting out properly) so any crits on that would definitely be appreciated.

Thanks guys.
#2
It's pretty good man. You're structure is rock solid. Verse to pre-chorus development works well the little guitar things is a nice unexpected moment.

A fair bit of work on the mix. Drums mainly. How did you track them?

The solo tone was a little off considering the rest of the track bit to sharp. Where everything else is pretty solid. I'm not loving the bass turnaround and then drum turnaround I'd go with just the guitar hook for chorus two.

The main sticking point for me, is the length. It's too long by about a minute. I'd go with a fade out with just the vocal section it doesn't need the final refrain that section is interesting enough. I just got bored.

If you chop it and get a nice garage vibe mix going this would be a pretty alternative radio friendly song.
#4
for some reason your tunes dont play for me from your profile...

Are you on soundcloud??
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#5
Quote by JWBlack
for some reason your tunes dont play for me from your profile...

Are you on soundcloud??


No, but thanks for letting me know. I thought it was just me...