#1
First song in a whilee..

Where ya been
The nights that I've been tryin to just
Fix this
The nights that I spent crying to myself
Where ya been
The window closing and you know it
Just give in
If it's worth it please dont throw it all away

Who's to blame
For all the nights that you spent wonderin
If it'll ever be the same
We've both exhaled words of ex games
Who's to blame
If you feel like you can't try this anymore
Who's to blame
Hell I'll take the blame just tell me

Are you out or are you in
Are you just trying to kill me again
Are you out or are you in
Just give me something that I can work with
Are you out or are you in

Who's to say
That this ever really fell apart
Or it's all a game
The way you take the love straight from my heart
Who's to say
I'm wasting time by fighting for you
It's not the same
Girl you've changed and I cant take all this pain

Are you out or are you in
Are you just trying to kill me again
Are you out or are you in
Just give me something that I can work with
Are you out or are you in

You cut me down just so I bleed
You always seem to find the best ways to get to me
I know karma's laughing at me
But the joke's all over now
and I'll leave before it breaks me down
before it breaks me down

Are you out or are you in
Are you just trying to kill me again
Are you out or are you in
Just give me something that I can work with
Are you out or are you in
Are you in no Just get out
#2
This is pretty good personally I would probably remove couple of choruses though. They make the lyrics a little too repetitive and aren't altogether necessary even in a verse chorus verse structured song. Perhaps use the chorus once or twice and have instrumental breaks between them to create interest through contrast.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28382180#post28382180
My most recent effort if you wish to comment back
Last edited by HowIshotguitar? at Oct 22, 2011,