Another song from my back log I've revisited. Had lot's of trouble with the mix but did what I could to get it as good as I could. Especially proud of the solo in this one.

thanks for checking out my song man.

I liked your chord progression and the solo was great. I liked the vocals too, they reminded me of 80's new wave for some reason.

Only thing I wasn't a big fan of was the strumming pattern, seemed too poppy and plasticky if that makes any sense.

Overall good work, and if the poppy sound is what you're going for then the strumming pattern does fit it well, just not my personal preference.
Can't believe how strange it is to be anything at all.
Yeah that was a bit of a rush job shouldnt off uploaded it really,
heres the more or less final one now.