Well I wrote this song over a couple of weeks (pretty much did one section then came back to the song a week later added another one etc). I think this song has potential, but section 3 needs to be revised and I need to stop ending songs with the intro part, but eh. I should also work on making longer songs

Whelp, well, you know, listen with RSE, headphones, and I'll critic back.
Last edited by Joshua1207 at Feb 15, 2012,