#1
It's also real short, because I thought that by adding any more riffs I would ruin it for some reason. So far I like what I've come up with a lot, and would like to know if anyone on Ug has anything to suggest, complain about, or anything like that. I'm open to honest opinions.

Please check it out here [UPDATED 10/23/2011]:
http://soundcloud.com/touke/sanctity-fouled


P.S. If you want to hear the 8-Bit version, it's here:
http://soundcloud.com/touke/melodic-metal-8-bit
Last edited by touke at Oct 24, 2011,
#3
Quote by Insanity 101
I really like this man...you've come up with something pretty awesome here.


Thanks man much appreciated!
#5
The only nag I have with it (it really is just a nag) is at the section at 1:40 and aroung there, I feel like you hold that same tremolo picking note a really long time. A simple note change would get rid of any negative thoughts on that riff. The rest of the riffs, and how the song all fits together, is awesome!
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#6
Quote by Zakkcd
The only nag I have with it (it really is just a nag) is at the section at 1:40 and aroung there, I feel like you hold that same tremolo picking note a really long time. A simple note change would get rid of any negative thoughts on that riff. The rest of the riffs, and how the song all fits together, is awesome!


I felt the same way about that part actually, but to be honest I didn't care because I just wanted it uploaded hehe. I shouldn't half ass stuff like that. Thanks for you comment man!
#7
Quote by NewYngwie
lol... anyway, how long did it take you to compose and record all of it?


I wrote it all yesterday and recorded it all today

But since I feel that this was half assed, I'm started over on the recording and changing the composition up a tiiiiiny bit. And the tone will definitely be better, as in you'll hear the notes cleaner but it won't be as heavy.

Yeah, and I hate spam hehe
#8
I rerecorded the song and replaced the original link at the top