#1
Here's my cover of the awesome Metallica's song "Orion" : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sasUBr-3vxw&feature=channel_video_title
I know there's some mistakes but I'm rather proud of this cover because I really love this song. So please comment & like and I'll do the same for you. C4C
Btw check out my channel to listen my others cover : http://www.youtube.com/user/UnePersonne85
#3
Hi there,

I think the solo part is the most interesting to listen to, and you're doing a pretty good job on that account imo. Watch your bends a bit. Some got a little out of tune. If I were you, I'd consider uploading a shorter version. 8 minutes is a lot - especially in this song where the riff (which I love as well though) is being repeated quite a few times. Other than that, cool!

C4C? My Master of Puppets Solo piano cover:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1489647
#4
Zeletros : Yeah, I know it's out of rhythm but you know I've been playing guitar for only one year and a half and I think I'm still a beginner but I'm learning. And when I record my covers I do a movie-making because I don't play along with the music so perhaps because of it . Anyway, thanks for your critic. I'll try to do better the next time.

mopedfrost : I think bends are hard on this song .
I don't want to upload a shorter version, I don't really have the time I'm quite busy.
Last edited by Animadversion at Oct 24, 2011,
#5
Quote by Animadversion
Yeah, I know it's out of rhythm but you know I've been playing guitar for only one year and a half and I think I'm still a beginner but I'm learning. And when I record my covers I do a movie-making because I don't play along with the music so perhaps because of it . Anyway, thanks for your critic. I'll try to do better the next time.


No, no, no and no.

NO BUTS are allowed when we are talking about keeping the rhythm. If you're a beginner, you avoid playing complicated things, avoid solos, avoid sweeps and playing fast.

Stop finding excuses.

Get a metronome and work on it. NOW.
#6
Ok, ok, ok. I don't work enough on each songs I play =/. I need to improve so I try. And this song has no sweeps and is not very fast.
#7
Quote by Animadversion
Ok, ok, ok. I don't work enough on each songs I play =/. I need to improve so I try. And this song has no sweeps and is not very fast.



Playing in rhythm is the foundation of music, regardless of the instrument.