#1
We are not
The only ones
Livin on the edge
Of a loaded gun

Yea but its
My only love
And the
Synthetic shine
Of the crimson sun

Yea I know
Its a lie
But I still can't leave
My vanilla sky

'Cause lifes always better
When you close your eyes

Yea I know
Its a lie
But I still can't leave
My vanilla sky

And live in
The backseat of my life

And you know
Bliss is
A hell of a game
The only ones there
Have gone insane

Infinite life on
The window pane
Infinite life
Flowin down my drain

Yea I know
Its a lie
But I still can't leave
My vanilla sky

Cause life's always better
When you close your eyes

Yea I know
Its a lie
But I still can't leave
My vanilla sky

And live in
The backseat of my life
#2
A little bit repetitive, but overall, it's a good piece :cheers;
Guitars:
-Gibson Les Paul Custom Shop Silverburst (Invader/'59)
-Fender Standard Telecaster HH Black (SH-5/'59)
-Fender Standard Stratocaster HH White (Nazgul/'59)
-Austin Guitars Les Paul Goldtop Copy (Distortion/'59)
-Ovation ApplauseAE44II Elite Black Acoustic


Amps/Cabs
-Peavey 6505+
-Peavey Stereo Chorus 2x12 Combo
-Behringer Ultracoustic ACX450 1x8 Acoustic Combo
-Marshall MX2x12 Cabinet


Wayyyyy too many effects pedals...
#6
i like this except i think the part about the crimson sun seems out of place.
maybe try
the synthetic shine
of fluorescent suns