#1
So this came into my head a little while ago...not sure if it seems to repetitive...ALL Feedback welcome.

Sitting together
talking forever
we were so good

looking eye to eye
until the day i die
we were so good

through hard times
that light would shine
we were so good

Chorus
And im making this statement to the world
that i will never love another girl
Like you......like you

Mabey we werent to be
But god what a memory
we were so good

i can still see that face
us two in a happy place
we were so good

Chorus
like you
like you(whispered)
Who's your daddy... well not me cuz ur momas ugly


These things are sex transport vehichles woot

This man just got a station wagon.
#2
And im making this statement to the world
that i will never love another girl
Like you......like you

Mabey we werent to be
But god what a memory
we were so good

THAT RIGHT THERE. Is good song writing! Maybe some of the better I've seen on here. The words at least, as for melody that's up to you.
#3
thank you for the compliment....any suggestions?
Who's your daddy... well not me cuz ur momas ugly


These things are sex transport vehichles woot

This man just got a station wagon.
#4
Hmmmmm, I don't really know. Does it have a guitar part or anything? I think you should try recording it or something so we can see.
#5
as of right now there are just lyrics... i working on some chords to get started but making melodies takes me forever...any tricks to help out?
Who's your daddy... well not me cuz ur momas ugly


These things are sex transport vehichles woot

This man just got a station wagon.