#2
It's okay.

Nothing amazing. Some of the drums fills were a little loose. But on the whole, solid rhythm track. Kind of need more parts before I can real excited about it.
I'd watch the transition at 1:20. But I'm mean a guitar could smooth that over.

Recording was pretty solid. When he moved up the octave it kind of went down in volume through these speaker. But they are shit macbook ones.

I'm interest to see you finish the tune.

Cheers
#3
Really cool piece, could see this in the background of a crime drama or something. No complaints with the songwriting at all. Drums need tightening up on the performance though, and the bass could use some treble and mids to make it pop in the mix. Aside from timing, the drum sound is really nice. Distortion on the bass could use some tone-tweaking to make it less fizzy.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28413666