Dug the riff interplay, and there's no doubt you guys have chops. Could use more bass IMO and the drums need to be up more in the mix. Guitars have good tone, but need blended in the mix a little better. Heavy as crap. From about 1:00 to 1:30 it sounded kind of like Fear Factory, great riffage there. Can't wait to hear the finished version!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28413666
Yeah I had a listen man, I know that song of theirs and it's a good cover very clear, the guitars could maybe sit a little softer tone-wise they feel quite pokey. It's just a demo but all of the points you mentioned are exactly the things I had in mind to change so thanks for that! Appreciate the comment