#2
Pretty cool, very solid. It didnt really lead me anywhere unexpected (i could guess what chord was coming next at times) but it had nice melody and a decent solo.
#5
Quote by Sulfur183
Pretty cool, very solid. It didnt really lead me anywhere unexpected (i could guess what chord was coming next at times) but it had nice melody and a decent solo.


Thanks Yeah i know what you mean. Im hoping to write some more songs with more progressive parts and less predictable Thanks for the feedback
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#6
Quote by Dio10101
Pretty solid stuff, you just need a singer on it. I liked it.


Thanks I may write some lyrics and record some vocals if i have time but i dont have any mics or anything decent. Only webcam :P Il see how it goes though Thanks for the feedback
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#7
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leony03,
Song is starting out good. The playing is tight. Nice riffs. The drums are good. Wouldn't hurt to have some vocals. I might have heard some clipping on the right speaker. Nice lead guitar. At ~4:00 it sounded like the treble was lacking. Sounds good overall! Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1490985



Thanks man Yeah like i said to another dude, i may write and record some lyrics at some point but i dont have the right equipment at the moment. At the 4:00 mark, i only recorded one track and layered it on both left and right because (sounds silly) i couldnt play the harmony well enough after so many tries :P Its the only part in the song i do that. Thanks for the feedback

Yours is very different and funky. I really like it! Really nicely produced and musically really nice sounding!
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#8
Thought it was surfing with the alien right at the beginning haha, fantastic drums going on overall in the intro! I like the chord progression over all, simple and catchy; fantastic build up to the solo. The solo could be a bit louder, or the drums could be lower...The solo itself was too short for my taste, but I love solos :P Kick ass outro though, that was my favorite part.

Over all this is a fantastic first full song, good stuff!

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#9
Quote by boratian
Thought it was surfing with the alien right at the beginning haha, fantastic drums going on overall in the intro! I like the chord progression over all, simple and catchy; fantastic build up to the solo. The solo could be a bit louder, or the drums could be lower...The solo itself was too short for my taste, but I love solos :P Kick ass outro though, that was my favorite part.

Over all this is a fantastic first full song, good stuff!

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1490199


Hahaa :P Thanks!! Im terrible at solos so i didnt want to do a long one :P Yeah the outro is my favourite part as well

Your song rocks! With some drums, that would be killer! Love your clean tone as well Very nice playing! \m/
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