#1
Hey guys! So people have been telling me to cover a Coldplay song pretty often. I decided to give it a shot and this was the result. I sped it all up a tad and moved the key up a half step (I think..). I sorta made it my own.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r_icCn6jIk0

So just give me your critism. Maybe like or subcribe to my Youtube Channel if you wanna hear more from me? Thanks!

Brannon~
Why pluck just one string when you can...
STRUM THE GUITAR!



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#2
You have a nice voice, especially for this type of thing. A good level of finesse and a good deal of confidence in that respect, comes across really well. Singing is in tune for the most part, but the humming section at the end was a little off. Nothing major.

In terms of the guitar the picking pattern you used was a little simpler than the original, I think more attention to dynamics would go a long way here. You basically play the same throughout the entire thing, I'd definitely have picked up toward the end and maybe altered the picking pattern. I also noticed you hang on chords for a little too long on occasion - so maybe try and make the chord changes smoother - again that's probably something to do the difficulties of singing whilst playing.

Overall I thought it was great! Good work.

Could you take a look at this for me?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28421302#post28421302

Many thanks.