#1
Any writers out there? Post parts of your stories, poems, lyrics, or anything else you have written. Share tips on writing, critique others work, and help each other out.

I personally am not a very good writer, but I thought this was a fun idea, and I'm hoping to maybe pick up some tips and work on my own writing with this thread!

Anyway, have fun!
"When that day comes I shall Futterwacken ... vigorously."
~ The Mad Hatter



#2
....thought we had a whole sub-forum dedicated to this......
It didn't take long to realise
The safest place was not her arms, but her eyes
Where she can't see you
For her gaze, it blisters;
Grey skin to cinders
#3
Isn't it just songwriting?
"When that day comes I shall Futterwacken ... vigorously."
~ The Mad Hatter



#4
Yeah I did a poem yesterday, I dunno though, I was still pretty hungover from the night before and it only took me like 15 minutes

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Sometimes too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometimes declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimmed;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st;
Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st:
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
#5
No, you can include poetry and prose, theres a seperate section where you can get advice on technique and stuff. Theres also competitions going on whenever the mods decide. I don't knnow about stories because I've never seen them posted but I'm sure they'd welcome it.
It didn't take long to realise
The safest place was not her arms, but her eyes
Where she can't see you
For her gaze, it blisters;
Grey skin to cinders
#6

TS should learn to
use the Ultimate Guitar
convenient search bar

Haiku FTW
ggg1 ggg3

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Last edited by behind_you at Oct 31, 2011,
#7
omfg let's play that game where we tell a story but we say one word each! i'll start

Yesterday,
OM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM
#8
my
"When that day comes I shall Futterwacken ... vigorously."
~ The Mad Hatter



#9
boyfriend
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Omae wa mou
Shindeiru



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Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
#11
my vagina
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ooh look at me i'm ERIKLENSHERR and i work at fancy pants desk jobs and wear ties and ply barely legal girls with weed and booze i'm such a classy motherfucker.
#14
Suddenly
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ooh look at me i'm ERIKLENSHERR and i work at fancy pants desk jobs and wear ties and ply barely legal girls with weed and booze i'm such a classy motherfucker.
#16
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Yeah I did a poem yesterday, I dunno though, I was still pretty hungover from the night before and it only took me like 15 minutes

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer's lease hath all too short a date:
Sometimes too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometimes declines,
By chance or nature's changing course untrimmed;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st;
Nor shall death brag thou wander'st in his shade,
When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st:
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.



You could've picked one of his less famous sonnets to plagiarize.

Sonnet 18?
Sing me to sleep.
#17
Quote by aeroslash09
You could've picked one of his less famous sonnets to plagiarize.

Sonnet 18?


No, I think I'll probably call it Fuck the Police
#18
Quote by Ninja Vampirate
No, I think I'll probably call it Fuck the Police


Cool shit, man.

I wrote this:

Fuck tha police
Comin straight from the underground
Young nigga got it bad 'cause I'm brown
And not the other color so police think
They have the authority to kill a minority

Fuck that shit, 'cause I ain't tha one
For a punk muthafucka with a badge and a gun
To be beatin on, and throwin in jail
We could go toe to toe in the middle of a cell

Fuckin with me 'cause I'm a teenager
With a little bit of gold and a pager
Searchin my car, lookin for the product
Thinkin every nigga is sellin narcotics


I think I'll call it Sonnet 18
Sing me to sleep.
#19
Most of my poems and novels are on swedish nowadays.

This is one in english.


"The end is nigh stated the old man, with neither fear, triumph, joy nor sadness in his voice, before he once again laid down to rest in his bed, perhaps for the very last time
As he was in the capacity of stating this it was obvious that the statement was far enough from reality this very instant that he could afford to spare the time to go back to sleep, but still close enough to make the statement without it being pointless. Although pointless it might have been nonetheless as the end of it all is a fact that is hopeless to follow through knowing until it in actuality happens. And if it is a fact that it happens there is little to do to change that fact, if the statement above is not a fact it is but a lie. A lie the old man with joy would be guilty of stating.
If it however happens it is both impossible and without any sort of interest to claim any causal correlation between the old man’s statement and the end of it all, as the end of it all would by all means also claim to be the end of all kinds of discussion of semantic and logical explanation of anything stated or done. Therefore the old man could with a smile once again turn his back on the world and stare in the wall. In his dreams the end is not as close. Perhaps the end will come and visit while he sleeps he pondered. "
sometimes I see us in a cymbal splash or in the sound of a car crash
Last edited by JohnnyGenzale at Oct 31, 2011,
#20
check out my poem:

i'm never gonna dance again
guilty feet have got no rhythm
well it's easy to pretend
i know you're not a fool

also fuck ya'll crackerz for ruining the one word story game
OM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM
#21
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also fuck ya'll crackerz for ruining the one word story game


It's a terrible game.