So a friend and I are working on this song we have. I pretty much came up with the riff and the vocal melodies and will work on the other parts and solos and he'll mainly be doing lyrics.

We got a verse down and I put a vocal melody to what his lyrics will have in mind, and then I don't have a chorus yet but came up with some idea for a solo. What do you guys think? Any criticism or suggestions?
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Not bad. Has a nice verse riff and melody for the vocal line. Keep up the good work, I'd like to hear the rest of it when you've tabbed it