#1
Ending to this song I'm working on,

She said it's not about the poetry
or all the pretty songs you wrote
it's not about the times you get angry
and scream as loud as you can
it's about the way you look at me
every time you tell me that you love me
like you never meant it quite as much as I did
it hurts
and now I think it's time for you to leave

and I'm still waiting for maturity to come with my age
but really I stopped growing up in high school
I may have even taken a few steps back
and I'm not quite the man I was when I was sixteen

Because if I was still sixteen
I'd be a little bit braver
I'd have the courage to tell her
how much she means to me
(Repeat this last bit forever)
#3
i think this will make a good song. the first bit was nothing new, a bit cliche and such but if nothing else its well composed.

I like it

you ever record anything, taylor?
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#4
Not a full song anyways.
As of now, I lack the basic equipment and singing ability to really make something I'd be happy with.

Thanks for the encouragement, both of yall.