#1
This is my second serious song ever written, and it's quite Offspring-ish. Just needs more woah's. Constructive criticism, please.


I look up to the sky
The sun shines into my eyes
And the world's a different place
The eagle soars so high
Looking for a place to hide
But the world's a giant maze

Yeah
I face the world and say
What's going on today?
But the world has turned away
So I take a step
A long walk on a small cliff
And I jump into the fray

Yeah

I try to find a reason
To stay here
You give me nothing
Your motive is clear
I try to see why the world's so dead
Why can't the carnage seize it's spread


It feels like an eternity
Dealing with your immaturity
But it's time I seize the day
I leave without a trace
Into a purple haze
I leave the world to it's craze

Yeah

I try to find a reason
To stay here
You give me nothing
Your motive is clear
I try to see why the world's so dead
Why can't the carnage seize it's spread