#1
http://soundcloud.com/kerryritter/redefinition

Not sure how I feel about the song, could use some input. Thanks so much.
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#2
Really solid song, I liked it. I'd listen to a full album. I thought the chorus was fantastic. The only thing I'd personally change is a bit more presence in the high end of the bass; I think a sansamp tone would fit perfectly.

Nice work!
#3
dude. yes.
“being in a room and sitting there with a ghost, hearing their voice in your head and seeing them as clearly as I'm seeing you right now.”
#4
As always, your stuff is awesome.

Um, crits... I really have none, but if I had to think reeeaaaaally hard, I would say the drums sound a little too robotic in places, just too perfect and smooth, know what I mean?

Otherwise, god damn awesome song!
#5
Thanks guys! I didn't really mix the song yet so hopefully I'll have the bass sounding better when it's done.

I agree with the drums. They're programmed in AD and the dynamics are kinda shitty (not that I really worked on it lol), but I'm having a friend come in and lay down real drums soon.
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