One thing I noticed right when the vocals came in was the drums. They seem too far ahead in the mix at times, but not too much to detract from the song too much. The rest of the instruments are done quite nicely, they sound quite clear. The only exception was the lead guitar in the solo, it wasn't quite as crisp as the rest of the guitars so it didn't quite stand out as much as it could.

I liked the guitar in the verses, but the rest unfortunately seemed too generic. This is a tough genre of music to play in, as a lot of the stuff has been done before. There didn't seem to be enough originality in the riffs to make anything stand out

Feel free to crit my new song, if you're up to it