SOADisdabest
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Join date: Jul 2006
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#1
Hey guys, this is quite a dark piece I wrote a few days ago I like most of it I think the climax might be a bit cluttered though, I'm wondering if I should lose the slides on the distortion guitar or maybe the chords on the other one? Either way, I'm keen to hear your opinion.
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BloodReverence
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Join date: Oct 2008
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#2
please lose the slides. they actually hurt my ears man, there's a difference between musical dissonance (the rest of the piece) and that part.

Otherwise though, I originally thought I wouldn't like it but if this had vocals I'd probably listen to it pretty often. It sounds really cool... other than those completely disgusting slides.
Rabbismith
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Join date: Jan 2011
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#3
^^ LOL
but yea i second that... the song is nice but whoosh those slides, while maybe sounding good when actually recorded, just do not work in that setting haha
Shaharz
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Join date: Jan 2007
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#4
I also think the slides are rather annoying.

Other than that, this was great. Made me envy you, since whenever I try writing stuff like that I really lose direction at some point.

Really good stuff

If you wanna C4C check out "The Sky Is Simply Low" in my sig
Last edited by Shaharz at Nov 11, 2011,