#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MVz0eYakrxced

hope you enjoy and criticize. I know I screwed up in the first fast lick and I improvize on purpose at the end. Any technique I can practice toget the first fast part right?

TY and C4C
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#2
Slow it down dude. your timing is all over the place, and the only way to fix that is slowing down. It's not just the fast stuff, you should also focus on playing the slow parts well. That's the way forward, and should improve you greatly.
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#3
You certainly know what you're doing, you just need to clean it up and sort the notes out. Good job though

And damn, you have the same amp and strap as me ;D
#6
thanks everyone. im gonna practice my timing and upload a 2nd take in a few months when I get it right!
Marty Friedman is GOD!

curently in a SEX MACHINEGUNS and X JAPAN phase AND Galneryus AND Anthem phase

damn J-Metal, why you so awesome

My Gear:

Schecter Hellraiser V-1 fr
Ibanez RG321mh
Fender GDC-200sce
Peavey Vypyr 30 w/ sanpera 1