#1
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/onecoveratime/music/all/play1059238

The song starts at 7 seconds in, for those of you who are impatient xD

And while im here, something really annoys me, and id like advice on how to fix it .

You see,in some songs i like how i sound, in others i despise it

Any advice ? Its frustrating when i like a new song, want to play it, and get to that hurdle
#2
You're voice is pretty weak, what you need to work on is singing with power. Breath into your gut and really push the air out when you sing.
I'm not a very technical singer, when i sing i just sing with all the heart and passion i can muster up see where it takes me, i'm not technically that skilled but people often get amazed by it.

Just listen to this guy, he's not very skilled on a technical level but he sings with such passion that it doesn't matter.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bCxEWPLDg5c

And also, this is probably your biggest mistake, you were pretty off key. Sometimes you we're completely flat. Work on your pitch ALOT, that is a dealbreaker.
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Last edited by Gord@k at Nov 10, 2011,
#3
When your referring to the off pitch/ flatness, do you mean the verses? ( the faster lyric and strum parts)

That part was a rap in the original song, and i just sung it out , if you get me, which is what gives it that flattish feel i think xD

As for the power thing, im not sure how to go about getting it! I train under SLS, and apparently it has a reputation for a lack of power in the singing voice