#1
Hey forum,
I would really appreciated if I could get some feedback on my latest recording.

http://soundcloud.com/faderfrost/aloft

It's pretty short and not super fancy, but any thoughts you have on anything is greatly appreciated

leave a link and i'll c4c
#2
pretty ok. it's overall a little predictable.

you're on to something though. just break free and be impulsive with your writing.