Pretty close I'd say!
In a moment I've lost
Taken from the inside
Her eyes take me away
Tear me apart from the inside out
Sounds close, but a longer clip would be more helpful. Also, upload on Soundcloud or Dropbox, people usually don't like downloading files.
Yeah it sounds pretty close. Should put it in a full mix to see how it sounds, could judge it much better. Mind sharing your chain/settings?