#1
Struggling with a writers block, this is the first thing I've come up with in months.
It's obviously not finished yet but there will be some more verses coming up later I hope.
c4c, as always


running towards the setting sun
chasing winter 'till it's gone
wading through the snow for you
sleeping beneath the waves
turning over scream your name
in my dreams I call for you

sadly you can't see beyond the headlights
terrified, you steer into the night
I am here to guide your way now, aren't I?
I'm the voice inside your mind
#3
Quote by gateway01
the first and second verse have nothing to do with each other.

but the lyrics are good.


That's probably because there used to be another part in between.
Thanks for reading, do you have something you'd want me to have a look at?
#5
yeah I kinda want to know what was there?

The first verse felt nice to me....but the second feels unnecessarily tense. Keep working on it and keep me posted!

Care to crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=28525546#post28525546
#6
Hi, I'm back!

I wrote a second verse, and I changed the rest a bit so it doesn't look like two different pieces anymore.
Well, it's still two different parts, but the first is from my point of view and the second is from another point of view, but still related to mine. I know, it's not very clear but you'll get it

running towards the setting sun
chasing winter 'till it's gone
wading through the snow for you
sleeping beneath the waves
turning over scream your name
in my dreams I call for you

If you don't move you don't feel the chains
we'll have to fight for change
I'm on the same side as you
you're not a wolf but you are howling
on a mountain top and drowning
I would dive right in for you

sadly you can't see beyond the headlights
you can't see me standing in the night
I am here to guide your way now, aren't I?
safely to the light