Hey guys, its been quite a while since I've posted anything here

Today I have a rough demo of an idea I've been fiddling with. I'm finally able to use a vocoder, which I've been dying to do for a while now, so this song is essentially a vehicle for testing that out.

Your thoughts on the composition itself would be awesome. I'd like some brutally honest opinions before I flesh it out, or maybe I won't flesh it out any further.

Formations of Mind:

Thanks to any and all who listen and of course as always.. I'll have a listen to anything of yours that you want me to.
Definitely needs some polish, but you have some good ideas here. One problem: your vocoder sounds are having a hard time competing to be heard. I think some EQ tweaking would help. Your guitar riffs are good, but they are stepping on the vocoder sounds also (I don't think it's common to hear vocoder & distorted guitar at the same time). Needs some electric or synth bass (or turn it up). I think it's worth fleshing out some more, because I like it for the most part. Please review my music at this link:

Last edited by aaron aardvark at Nov 14, 2011,