#1
Chalk stains the concrete,
blood stains on my shirt sleeve.
Black eye; fat lip
bloody knuckles and torn seams.
Eight year old brawler
whose scar tissue screams,
“I'm a perfectionist
and perfect is a skinned knee.”
Quote by Kozlic
Music doesnt need to be quality to be good.


Press eject, give me the tape, if you know what's good for you
#3
Quote by ali.guitarkid7
That was very nice.

Thanks dawg, actually pretty chuffed about that considering how much I like your pieces ^_^. If you want me to have a look at anything let me know, I'm pretty rubbish at critiquing though.
Quote by Kozlic
Music doesnt need to be quality to be good.


Press eject, give me the tape, if you know what's good for you
#7
Hey, thanks for the kind words
Quote by Kozlic
Music doesnt need to be quality to be good.


Press eject, give me the tape, if you know what's good for you
#8
Short and sweet, really, but I get the whiff of a scent that says you can do much better.
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いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
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じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching