nice riff! i'm no good at mixing, but it sounded decent overall except for the very synthetic synths, which has nothing to do with how you mixed them. maybe lowering their volume would make the plastic-ness less obvious. maybe put some reverb on the snare and lower the volume of that too.

i hope this is going to become a song...
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