Oh you're from Philly, I used to live by there Not anymore anyway, cool music. Good vocals. I feel like the verses weren't really defined melody wise, it feels a little jumbled. But maybe that's how you like it, I prefer a more melodic pop-punkish sound I guess The drums should be a little louder, along with the rhythm guitar/bass they lack the impact they need, especially when they come from the palm muted section to the fast part, it comes on a lot weaker than it really is. Good lyrics, I really like the voices they sound great. Cool stuff, C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1497221