Timing is a little iffy on the lead, but this kind of thing is hard to do so I get it. The recording of the rhythm-ish guitar is a little too loud and bassy, it takes away from the lead which is very well written and preformed. I would definitely expand on it, make it longer, add a little more variation. It's very well done though good job C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1497221
I really enjoyed listening to this. As rockfan7 said, the rhythm is a bit too loud and bassy, but it doesn't matter too much. Overall, a well written and well played piece of music! Good stuff